Night Flight- changed
by hkollef
(I think I like this version of night flight better.)
night flight
the last time i flew
it was daylight
i didn’t look out the window.
now
i look outside and see
a thousand lights;
and each light is
a thousand souls
burning against
the
gaslamp yellow nightscape.
there is space here
and silence
and the silence deafens
and beneath the silence there is noise
and-
once in tokyo i had the perfect drink
like electric moonbeams
violets
and secrets soaked in gin.
i taste it here
in the recycled air above the nightscape
while viewing the souls
that may or may not be
the remnants of fevered dreams
while hearing the silence
that is not silence
it is breathing, it is a pulse–
listen with me
if we’re very quiet, we can hear
the faint strains of
tokyo jazz
filtering through the soft thrum
of wheels and
motorized air
and a crying baby that’s never tasted
the smoky sweet burn of gin and juniper.
I know someone who likes anything w gin, let alone ”electric moonbeams
violets and secrets soaked in gin” ….. sounds like you have found a creative muse in Prague …..
Definitely better.
simply wonderful…I feel like I am there with you!
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